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KorrAsami: Chapter 7: KWAU: LOKAU by doozle-lange
KorrAsami: Chapter 7: KWAU: LOKAU
Update pages 179 to 184
The Legend of Korra Alternative Universe began 30 days after the defeat of Amon.  Avatar Korra must deal with world leaders as old fears and prejudices resurface.  Amon was the symptom of the disease.  Tensions between benders and non-benders threaten to ignite into a World Wide Civil War.  Avatar Aang's utopian world has failed.  Avatar Korra must Fight for Peace -- possible alone.   Secondary story:  The Animals cry out for Justice, Honor and Respect.   Avatar Korra must also bring Justice to the Animal Kingdom for 2,500 years of neglect and abuse by the humans.

Next Update 15 January 2015

H A P P Y   N E W   Y E A R   2 0 1 5

Chapter 7 Month One  5th day: page 1.  7th day: page 69.  10th day: page 179. 

Themes
Opening:  Kinnie Starr - Alright  >> www.youtube.com/watch?v=LM8yBR… <<
Ending:  Tracy Chapman - The Promise  >> www.youtube.com/watch?v=cQ0kh3… <<
NEW Bonus:  [Terrorism, Destruction, CHAOS]   TERROR - Keepers Of The Faith   >> www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uonmop… << 
NEW Bonus:  [Night after explosion Azula gets blitzed drunk]  Sia - Chandelier  >> www.youtube.com/watch?v=8DS-h6… <<

Avatar Korra gained a new ally.  Kyoshi Warrior Azula -- The Guardian Of The Avatar doozle-lange.deviantart.com/jo…

Kyoshi Warriors Series

Badlands Wars
Into The Depth: Kyoshi Warriors: Badlands Wars   Updates Suspended
Kyoshi Warriors: What Happened To Azula  Completed

The Legend of Korra AU
Part2: Chapter 7: KWAU: LOKAU: KorrAsami Updated 1st of the month.
Justice for Avatar Korra: KorrAsami: LOKAU  Completed

Book 1: Air, Book 2: Spirits, Book 3: Change, Book 4: Balance   >> www.gogoanime.com/category/ava… <<

© Copyright 2013, 2014 Gary Lange, Jr., The Legend of Korra AU: KorrAsami -- Please Heal Me.
Disclaimer: All characters, trademark and copyright of The Legend of Korra and Avatar: The Last Airbender are the property of Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko, Co-creators of The Legend of Korra and Avatar: The Last Airbender. Series was created at Nickelodeon Animation Studios in Burbank, California.
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Avatar Korra, Kyoshi Warrior Healer by doozle-lange
Avatar Korra, Kyoshi Warrior Healer
Kyoshi Warrior Alternative Universe

In 171 ASC five to seven months before Harmonic Convergence, Kyoshi Warrior Asami shielded the body of Jinora from the explosion of a terrorist bomb.  Jinora survived.  Asami did not.  Caught in Avatar Kyoshi's arms, Asami drifted into the Spirit World to be with her Mother.  Avatar Korra would not accept the death of Asami.  She used a dangerous, deadly Kyoshi Healer technique -- Breath of Life.  Asami returned from the Spirit World.  Some of the front bangs of Korra turned snow white blue.  The stress on her body from offering her essence (spirit) to resurrect Asami.

Because of her heroism, the Elders of the Kyoshi Alliance of Warriors made Avatar Korra a Kyoshi Warrior Healer -- Rank Master.  She only told the Kyoshi Archivists about the experience of saving Asami.  Sorry, must be an Elder to read the Archive.  There is a public record below with page number.

Part2: Chapter 7: KWAU: LOKAU: KorrAsami
Scene Thirty Six -- Coming of age.  Page 164 to 184. for story and context.

Daz 4.6  www.daz3d.com/technology/

Book 1: Air, Book 2: Spirits, Book 3: Change, Book 4: Balance   >> www.gogoanime.com/category/ava… <<

© Copyright 2013, 2014 Gary Lange, Jr., The Legend of Korra AU: KorrAsami -- Please Heal Me.
Disclaimer: All characters, trademark and copyright of The Legend of Korra and Avatar: The Last Airbender are the property of Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko, Co-creators of The Legend of Korra and Avatar: The Last Airbender. Series was created at Nickelodeon Animation Studios in Burbank, California.
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We Are Lost by doozle-lange
We Are Lost
HAPPY HOLIDAYS from Kyoshi Warriors Alternative Universe

Thirty days of vacation in the Spirit World recharged Avatar Korra and Warrior Asami.  King Wu invited them to a celebration at one of the night clubs that survived the attack.  Asami kind of knew the location of the club.  "Well, before the building references were knocked down.  [Giggled]"  Walking down a back alley, Asami became frustrated...

[Picture Above]

Asami:  Okay, Avatar.  You accepted this invitation.  Can you do a vine-chi thingy and find Mako or Bolin at the club?

Korra:  Chill, Fan Girl.  [Knelt down, touched the ground, traced the energy of Mako]  oooOOOooo  [Raised her hand, stood straight up]

Asami:  So, what happened?  Did you find him?  Where is the party?  The location of the club??

Korra:  [Blushed]  Uuhh..  Yes, I found him...  He wasn't alone... [Chuckled]

Asami:  [Confused, firm]  Oh... Kay.  He's at a party.  Of course he wasn't alone.

Korra:  [Smiled]  Noooo... Let's say he left the party... early...

Asami:  [Smirked]  Mako couldn't handle the night life...  We always left early.  HE went straight to sleep when we got home.

Korra:  [Started walking toward Main Street]  Oooohhhh... He is home.  Just not his home...
[Asami confused]  When I reached his energy, I looked through his eyes to get my bearings...
[Chuckled nervously]  And saw Ginger's face.

Asami laughed loudly...

Korra:  [Burst out laughing]  Well, I did escape with the address of the night club.  Come on, Sato.  Party time!!!


Daz 4.6  www.daz3d.com/technology/

The Legend of Korra AU
Part2: Chapter 7: KWAU: LOKAU: KorrAsami Updated 1st of the month.
Justice for Avatar Korra: KorrAsami: LOKAU
Book 1: Air, Book 2: Spirits, Book 3: Change, Book 4: Balance   >> www.gogoanime.com/category/ava… <<

© Copyright 2013, 2014 Gary Lange, Jr., KWAU: LOKAU: KorrAsami -- Please Heal Me.
Disclaimer: Asami Sato and Avatar Korra, and other characters, trademark and copyright of The Legend of Korra are the property of Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko, Co-creators of The Legend of Korra and Avatar: The Last Airbender. Series was created at Nickelodeon Animation Studios in Burbank, California.
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Asami lost everything by doozle-lange
Asami lost everything
Title said it all... Darn writers. Leave Asami Alone. The Legend of Korra: Book 2: Spirits.
Book 1: Air, Book 2: Spirits, Book 3: Change, Book 4: Balance   >> www.gogoanime.com/category/ava… <<


Asami's persistence and endurance payed off...  Avatar Korra chose to be with Asami.  May their relationship grow and prosper.
Finale Update. 19 December 2015.  Friendship blossomed.  Korrasami TV-Y7 FV

1. Hamilton, J. (Writer), & Graham, I. (Director). (October 11, 2013). The Sting [The Legend of Korra, Book Two: Spirits]. In M. D. DiMartino (Executive Producer), A. Ehasz (Co-Executive Producer), B. Konietzko (Executive Producer), & M. Wong (Animation Producer). Burbank, CA, USA: Nickelodeon Animation Studios.

Disclaimer: All characters, trademark and copyright of The Legend of Korra is the property of Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko, Co-creators of The Legend of Korra. Series was created at Nickelodeon Animation Studios in Burbank, California.
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Subject:  Legend of Korra: Book 4: The Last Stand. Aired on 19 December 2014.

Where was the outcry about the amount of violence in the season finale?  Fantasy violence?  A human body being slammed against a metal roof so hard the impression of the body was left.  Then dragged from one side of the roof to the other.  Scraping so hard there was sparks.  Only fantasy about that scene was no blood spurts or blood marks and streaks left on the roof.  Maybe some bruises or 'dry' blood after the battle.  But no blood spurts.  And after the combatants 'catch their breath,' they continue to fight as if nothing happened.  Real fight at the pace of Korra and Kuvira should have been over in 10 minutes or less. Nobody could have lasted as long as those two.  Only redeeming scene was Kuvira holding her side after Korra dragged her body out of the Robot.  A robot which fell 23 stories into a building.  Did they have airbags or something?  Both should be dead.  Too many violent scenes to critique.  Suggestion, watch finale again. Not good to show Death to TV-Y7 unless there was FV at the end. Remember the watch post of United Forces?  The one Kuvira exploded with her nice and neat purple/pink fantasy ray gun?  Rather good writing technique to leave the death of the soldiers -- ambiguous.  You know, they could have rushed down to the bomb shelter before the ray destroyed their base.  Sure.  Right, Mommy? 

Nice article about television violence located  APA The Effect of Television Violence on children 

And truly the ambiguous writing of Legend of Korra allowed a TV-14 anime cartoon to be given a TV-Y7 FV rating.  The coveted FV or Fantasy Violence.  It seems to me sexual acts were not shown in Legend of Korra.  The sexual preferences of the characters were not mentioned.  The only married couples were Male and Female.  The only 'dating' couples were Male and Female.  Sexual acts were ambiguously implied.  Katara and Aang had three children.  Toph had two daughters.  Both her husbands (got married at least) left (abandoned) her or separation was mutual.  Zuko had a daughter who had a son. (don't know about the daughter's mother or the father of her son)  Tenzin (34) married Pema (18) earliest they could marry if the legal age of consent were 18.  Had 4 children.  Male and Female marriage.  Looked okay.  Children existed.  Just assume the method.  Nobody has sex in a cartoon.  Nothing said during the series.  Nothing bad was said about these sexual acts.  Just... Nothing was said at all.

Suggestion:  Watch the finale closely from the wedding scene (Male and Female, of course) to the final scene before the words 'The End.'
Korrasami is not slash.  Makorra is not slash.  Shipping hate groups survive by tapping into the prejudice and fear of people.
Both female and male slash exist inside of Korrasami and Makorra. 

But the assumption that ALL and EVERY piece of Korrasami and Makorra fan art or fan fiction IS slash --- IS WRONG.

NO WHERE DOES MICHAEL OR BRYAN STATE THAT KORRA AND ASAMI ARE GAY OR BISEXUAL!!!  That assumption is in your head...

SO.....

Take the finale at face value.  Ambiguous. 
1. Korra made amends to Mako bringing closure for herself.
2. Korra sincerely listened to Tenzin humbly accepting his counsel and praise . 
3. Korra made amends to Asami.  Asami:  I don't think I could have handled losing you (Korra) and my father in the same day.  Korra comforted Asami consoling her.  Decided to go to the Spirit World to spend time together.

Ambiguous.

Two friends sharing an adventure together in the Spirit World -- alone.  Anything more... Is all in your head.

doozle-lange
Hello Friends.
I am refreshed from taking a break from writing KWAU.
LOKAU scheduled to be updated 1 November 2014.
Then monthly updates.  Badlands Wars will be updated as possible.

Legend of Korra Alternate Universe part of the Kyoshi Warriors Alternate Universe.

Canon will be as followed:
1.  Legend of Korra: Book 1: Air
2.  Legend of Korra: Book 2: Spirits
3.  Legend of Korra: Book 3: Change
4.  Legend of Korra: Book 4: Balance
5. (assumed) canon from Avatar: The Last Airbender.

After the Finale of Legend of Korra: Book 4: Balance has aired, then the canon of LOKAU is closed period.
IF Avatar Korra dies or is killed in Book 4, LOKAU will be written that Avatar Korra will NOT be killed.

* * * N E W * * *In the Kyoshi Warriors AU, Zaheer sealed his own Fate when he escaped.  All the Red Lotus sealed their Fate.
The added scene for Book 4 answered the question... What about Justice for Avatar Korra.

Other changes to Legend of Korra: Book 2 to Book 4 will be included in LOKAU: Book 1: KorrAsami: Part 3.  Added or changed scenes will be needed to keep continuity with Badlands Wars and the Kyoshi Warriors Alternative Universe.

There is a logic to the saga (15 books)
1.  Relationship with Azula.  The people she has touched become bonded.  With her perfect mind and memory, she will always remember them.
2.  Redemption of Azula.    From  Kyoshi Warriors: What Happened To Azula 
Yue:  [Held Azula in her arms, Yue’s glow increased and Azula’s hair became silky white –

the color of the Silver Birch in the wild forests of the Earth Kingdom.]

For all she has done, there is still some Pure Light inside of her…  

Thank you for your support.
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Pridipdiyoren Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Digital Artist
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doozle-lange Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :-)  so many color. thank you, too. pretty :-)
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SpiritofColors Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, did you want me to do a TAB request in the pa st? I am trying to remember what it was? (TAB as in angry beavers XD), do you remember what the request was? I can re do it :)
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doozle-lange Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes.  Found the copy on my hard drive.  NOTE me on how to get a copy of the file to you. 

First part of the name of the file >>  so__dag_does_love_norb__
panel 1:  dag drawing something on paper, norb looks like ???
panel 2:  dag showed norb the picture "DAG + NORB 4-EVR"
panel 3:  norb with big soft AWW eyes "AW. Daggy Waggy"
It's wonderful !!!  Love the angry beavers.
Happy Neko 
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SpiritofColors Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Hm Wanna email it to me and I can post it back up on here? :la:

Meee too I love those beavers, especially Norbie  :D
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doozle-lange Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sure,  I'll note you my email account. so you can bounce me an email. 
We can play email Pong. hehe.  Ping ping...
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AdrenalineRush1996 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
Thanks to you, I've officially changed supporting ships from Makorra to Korrasami today.
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doozle-lange Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Main reason I stopped Makorra (Middle of season 1 )  was the anger in Mako.  I watched the short stories when he was teens on the street.  Mako has issues (Asami said it)

Yoda said, "Anger, fear, aggression. The dark side are they. Once you start down the dark path, forever will it dominate your destiny." 
Now, I see Ginger tough enough to handle Mako. And he gets his trophy wife -- When Ginger Let's Mako think that.  haha.
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AdrenalineRush1996 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
Yeah, I have to agree. Mako: Good, badass guy, but can be a bit of a jerk when it comes to love triangles.
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ZZJAKDRW Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
thank you for the llama.
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